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100% agree with all your points here (also the Lucille Bluth quote? you’ve got my attention). I struggled so much with the screen play, it felt so haphazardly put together without any interesting emotional through line to connect anything.

I wrote about the character/screenplay issues here if you’d like to take a look!! https://lobbyconversations.substack.com/p/audience-empathy-is-earned-not-guaranteed?r=86e14f&utm_medium=ios

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Spielberg is an expert director, but a terrible writer. He understands storytelling, but doesn't quite understand story, if that makes sense. I actually found similar issues with Close Encounters (I saw it for the first time a few months back), where the characters seemed totally inscrutable in terms of their behavior (and no, I'm not just talking about Dreyfus losing his mind) and a lot of what happens seems to happen just so we can get to the (admittedly quite stunning) ending Spielberg wanted to get us to.

I found the third act of Disclosure Day pretty gripping, in a vacuum, because it was so well crafted that I couldn't help but put myself in a mindset where I'm imagining what it might be like to actually be watching this for real on TV. But everything around it is so convoluted and convenient that it all falls apart the moment you think about it. It's a shame, because there's cool stuff here, but it just doesn't work.

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